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fine

German translation: Ende der Betreuung

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Italian term or phrase:fine delle prestazioni
German translation:Ende der Betreuung
Entered by: valentina bigiarini

14:01 Nov 22, 2006
Italian to German translations [PRO]
Marketing - Tourism & Travel
Italian term or phrase: fine
la frase è inserita in un catalogo turistico.
al termine del programma giornaliero, si trova la dicitura

*fine delle nostre prestazioni*

ovvero, da quel momento in poi il tour operator non assiste più i viaggiatori che dovranno gestirsi autonomamente.

la mia soluzione era

Ende unserer Dienstleistungen
oppure pensavo
Ende des Tagesprogrammes

cosa ne dite ?
grazie
valentina bigiarini
Italy
Local time: 04:07
Ende der Betreuung
Explanation:
Das klingt etwas freundlicher und weniger technokratisch und eignet sich vielleicht dadurch besser für eine Katalog, der für potentielle Kunden bestimmt ist. "Betreuung" impliziert "durch unsere Firma".
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Local time: 04:07
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4 +5Hiermit enden unsere Leistungen
Thomas Atzert
4Ende der Betreuung
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16 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +5
fine delle nostre prestazioni
Hiermit enden unsere Leistungen


Explanation:
Das Nomen Ende (plus Genitiv) würde ich vermeiden, da er eher eine unüberschreitbare Grenze markiert, und statt dessen das "fine" durch das Verb "enden" wiedergeben.

Thomas Atzert
Germany
Local time: 04:07
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Alessandra Carboni Riehn
49 mins

agree  Martina Frey: elegant gelöst
2 hrs

agree  Heide
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agree  Giuseppe Duina
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agree  Regina Eichstaedter: ich würde "hier" statt "hiermit" verwenden
1 day 5 mins
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1 day 1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Ende der Betreuung


Explanation:
Das klingt etwas freundlicher und weniger technokratisch und eignet sich vielleicht dadurch besser für eine Katalog, der für potentielle Kunden bestimmt ist. "Betreuung" impliziert "durch unsere Firma".

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Local time: 04:07
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