22:27 Jan 3, 2011
This has been another difficult choice, thanks to all of your fantastic suggestions! My ultimate decision came down to how the term "flowed" in my final sentence.
Michael & Leigh: I haven't heard these expression used lately, so thanks for reminding me of some great idioms! However, I felt uncomfortable bypassing the "science" aspect completely.
Mark: I totally agree with your reasoning. However: *the infant swam/floated by the book* sounds off to me, if only elementally (I end up picturing a soggy book).
*swam according to the theory* is the most concise answer, while still remaining conversational (a tad less formal than *as science predicted*) |