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Но в тот раз я нахимичил

English translation: But this time I brewed it up real good!

06:21 Feb 21, 2009
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
Russian term or phrase: Но в тот раз я нахимичил
-Ты тоже алхимик?
-Ну как тебе сказать... Не совсем... Но в тот раз я нахимичил!

Нахимичил - герой подразумевает взрыв, который произошел по его вине. Но о взрыве знаем только мы и он. :-) Как бы это слово перевести так, чтобы и смысл нашего "нахимичил" остался, и чтобы созвучно было со словом "алхимик, химия"? Можно, как всегда, недословно. Но чтобы созвучие и сарказм были, плиз.
Vika_S
Local time: 06:02
English translation:But this time I brewed it up real good!
Explanation:
"real good" here sounds sardonic, of course.
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Michael Korovkin
Italy
Local time: 15:02
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Спасибо! Вписалось в контекст отлично. :-)
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Summary of answers provided
5But this time I mixed my chemistries... explosively.
DTSM
5But this time it turned a real cracker!
Alexandra Taggart
4But this time I brewed it up real good!
Michael Korovkin
3concoction
Mark Berelekhis
3I did badly that time as a chemist/I failed ( or messed up) as a chemist that time
Mikhail Korolev


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35 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
concoction


Explanation:
This may be the only suitable word. On one hand it's a chemical mixture, on the other hand you can concoct a scheme, a plan, etc. So, something along the lines of:

'Well, not exactly... But that one concoction was mine/my fault/my doing!'

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Note added at 54 mins (2009-02-21 07:16:15 GMT)
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Another idea to get away from химичить a bit:

"Well, maybe not an alchemist... Wait, is that the guy who gets to blow shit up?" ('stuff' instead of 'shit' if you need to stay PG).

Mark Berelekhis
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
But this time I brewed it up real good!


Explanation:
"real good" here sounds sardonic, of course.

Michael Korovkin
Italy
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Спасибо! Вписалось в контекст отлично. :-)
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6 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
I did badly that time as a chemist/I failed ( or messed up) as a chemist that time


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Mikhail Korolev
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7 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
But this time I mixed my chemistries... explosively.


Explanation:
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14 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
But this time it turned a real cracker!


Explanation:
" a real cracker" - something stunning, extraordinary, impressive.Derives from Christmas cracker (хлопушка). You may say "it was a real cracker" about best selling books, tops of pops or fantastic events.

Alexandra Taggart
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