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| 07:03 Aug 8, 2019 |
| Spanish to English translations [PRO] Business/Commerce (general) / Website/marketing/business | |||||||
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|  Selected response from: bigedsenior Local time: 12:34 | ||||||
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peer agreement (net): +1As a result of our commitment to... Explanation: Something like this might work for a marketing text... Best wishes. |
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peer agreement (net): +1Based on their commitment to... Explanation: I wouldn't use 'our commitment' as the verb following is in the third person plural so it sounds better to use either 'their' or 'its' in the first part of the sentence. Based on their commitment to the automation and digitization of the sector, XXX signed an agreement ..... |
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betting on automation and digitalization of the sector Explanation: http://fourbythree.eu/the-business-of-automation-betting-on-... |
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In their/its strategy... Explanation: ... of sector automation and digitization... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 8 hrs (2019-08-08 15:29:06 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Although businesses like to throw in touchy-feely vocabulary like "commitment" in their blurbs and "mission statements", it's really just a strategy. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 8 hrs (2019-08-08 15:31:11 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Something like "initiative" could do the job just as well, without pretending to be goody-goody: "As part of their sector automation and digitization initiative,...XXX y XXX signed an agreement..." -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 8 hrs (2019-08-08 15:32:22 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- "Drive" sounds dynamic, so that could work as well: "In their drive to promote automation and digitisation in the sector, XXX... " -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 8 hrs (2019-08-08 15:33:13 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- There you go, there's three options I think could do the job without mentioning "commitment" or (LOL) "betting"... |
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peer agreement (net): +1In the endeavor to .... Explanation: ..... automate and digitize goal, aim, obejtive, could also be used |
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