del uso que ses le dé a los mismos

English translation: (and for ) the use that is made of them…

10:29 Jul 20, 2018
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Law/Patents - Other / Privacy Policy
Spanish term or phrase: del uso que ses le dé a los mismos
Context: "[Organización] es responsable de recabar sus datos personales, del uso que se le dé a los mismos y de su protección."

In a Mexican NGO's Privacy Policy. My target audience is heterogeneous (and not necessarily native English speakers), so I would like to know what this phrase means rather than its translation if possible.
Zosia Niedermaier-Reed
United Kingdom
Local time: 15:59
English translation:(and for ) the use that is made of them…
Explanation:
[Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them and their protection.

(Some users might prefer another version with an Oxford comma)

[Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them, and their protection.

NB: As this query is posted in the Spanish to English translation section, that is what I'm suggesting. For an explanation in Spanish of the sentence, it should be posted in the ES-ES section.


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Note added at 12 mins (2018-07-20 10:41:46 GMT)
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Some might also prefer "collecting" rather than "gathering"... but to me it's six of one and half a dozen of the other.
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neilmac
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Local time: 16:59
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(and for ) the use that is made of them…


Explanation:
[Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them and their protection.

(Some users might prefer another version with an Oxford comma)

[Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them, and their protection.

NB: As this query is posted in the Spanish to English translation section, that is what I'm suggesting. For an explanation in Spanish of the sentence, it should be posted in the ES-ES section.


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Note added at 12 mins (2018-07-20 10:41:46 GMT)
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Some might also prefer "collecting" rather than "gathering"... but to me it's six of one and half a dozen of the other.

neilmac
Spain
Local time: 16:59
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Laura Jimenez
52 mins

agree  S. Kathryn Jiménez Boyd
1 hr

agree  Robin Levey: Agree with Oxford - especially if target readers are not necessarily native English speakers.
2 hrs

agree  philgoddard: Though this is a bit wordy - you could say "gathering, using and protecting".
2 hrs

agree  JohnMcDove: Yes. It matches the original register. :-)
4 hrs

agree  Joshua Parker
6 hrs
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