triple balance

English translation: with the triple advantages indicated in our memorandum

15:30 Jan 11, 2008
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Marketing - Computers: Systems, Networks
Spanish term or phrase: triple balance
"Porque hemos puesto en marcha actuaciones que lo demuestran y quedan recogidas en triple balance de nuestra memoria de Responsabilidad Social Corporativa inspirada en los principios rectores y los indicadores recogidos en el Global Reporting Iniciative."
I have found the phrase used with these three items in many places "Económico, Social y Sostenible." I think this is waht the reference is being made to. I just don't see how I can translate the idea.
S Ben Price
Spain
Local time: 11:56
English translation:with the triple advantages indicated in our memorandum
Explanation:
When writers wax poetic, it really screws things up! Give me a dry, straight-to-the-point technical text anytime! Do you think this re-write adequately conveys the idea?

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Note added at 6 hrs (2008-01-11 21:33:19 GMT)
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I don't see the wordplay myself, but you may be right. Even so, wordplay is more a question of style than of information. If you can find an equivalent wordplay in English, fine! Otherwise, just get the idea across!
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Peter Clews
Spain
Local time: 11:56
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with the triple advantages indicated in our memorandum


Explanation:
When writers wax poetic, it really screws things up! Give me a dry, straight-to-the-point technical text anytime! Do you think this re-write adequately conveys the idea?

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Note added at 6 hrs (2008-01-11 21:33:19 GMT)
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I don't see the wordplay myself, but you may be right. Even so, wordplay is more a question of style than of information. If you can find an equivalent wordplay in English, fine! Otherwise, just get the idea across!

Peter Clews
Spain
Local time: 11:56
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Asker: This does help - but I think they are making a play on words - 3x balance for "economic social and sustainable"

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