Björn Vrooman May 6, 2018:

Hello Michael Rejoice! I am taking my KudoZ sabbatical, so my name will pop up very rarely now, if at all.

In any case, my remark wasn't addressed to you. You may have noticed that the d-box post including the comment about "bonus" had been posted before a second answer was up.

Sometimes, it just seems as if no one else took a second look at the document before submitting it for translation. I don't like this. Once submitted, people will be reluctant to change the original, which is understandable.

Best and enjoy your Sunday

Michael Martin, MA Apr 25, 2018:

@Björn Could you restrict your remarks to the weather, going forward? I am getting a little tired of revising my entries...:)

Björn Vrooman Apr 24, 2018:

PS @Martina Sometimes I wonder, though, whether someone takes a second look at those German documents before sending them to you.

This is the right usage of "3-Fach-Plus":
http://www.pelletsheizung.de/de/pressemitteilungen/IDnews=14...
https://www.hexal-elements.de/serviceartikel/docs/Patientenr...

Even if you remove all those "pluses," you continue to have a product.

However, yours is a Fachmesse. In essence, it says that one "Plus" of this Fachmesse, which has turned into a Leitmesse, is that it's a Fachmesse. If you remove those three pluses, you have zilch.

I'm weeping over here.

Best

Björn Vrooman Apr 24, 2018:

Hello Lonnie I apologize if the second part of my post was a bit confusing. I did say "triple your" in the first half. So I agree that "your" is better; I merely wanted to get away from just slapping "triple" onto "benefit," as suggested at the outset.

Best

Lonnie Legg Apr 24, 2018:

@Björn Agree with basic suggestion re turning it around.
But I'd make it "triple *your* benefits" (Anglo promo loves addressing the customer directly).

Björn Vrooman Apr 24, 2018:

Hello Martina Unfortunately, this forum is very rigid sometimes. You should turn it around and write something like this:
https://goldminddigital.com/3x-trade-show-results-integrated...

E.g., "Triple your trade show/fair results..." or "...will triple your trade show/fair results" and list what will.

Instead, you'll probably end up with some rarely used compound noun.

Else, it's "(get) triple the benefits" (forget about bonus) or "three-in-one," possibly in conjunction with "benefit/profit."

Best