English to Chinese Tech/Engineering Computers: Software

Banks, like many organizations, have hundreds, even thousands, of these kinds of rules. Performing these kinds of checks on messages coming in can be an immediate source of operational on-demand intelligence. Using XQuery, rather than hard coding in Java or C#, makes them easier to deploy and keep up to date. This is because XQuery is declarative in nature, where you state the result you want to achieve rather than coding how you would go about achieving it. This results in compact code that is easier to read and maintain. The concept can even be extended to pull in reference values from other data sources (EII just for rules checking!).
同许多组织一样，银行也有上百条甚至上千条这样的规则。对进入的消息执行这种检查，可以立即获得操作按需智能。使用XQuery，而不是借助Java或者C＃的硬编码，就可以简化智能的部署、并且保持最新。这是因为XQuery是说明性的查询语言：你可以说明想要获得的结果，用不着通过编代码说明怎样获得结果。因而获得的紧凑代码识读及维护起来比较简单。这个概念甚至可以延伸开来，从其他数据源获取参考值（？？？）。
我的版本只是遵循字面意思，有没有通俗些的？