https://www.proz.com/kudoz/english-to-german/art-literary/10203-you-make-me-want-to-be-a-better-man.html

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virginiabab (X) Jun 22, 2017:
hi my name is virginia,i saw your profile
today and become interested to know more about you,
so here is my e mail address ([email protected])
just contact me back so that i will give you more of my pictures
for you to know whom i am,

Proposed translations

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Deinetwegen möchte ich gern ein besserer Mensch sein

deinetwegen möchte ich gern ein besserer Mann sein (this would be more erotical, I guess)
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agree Roland Grefer
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Wegen dir möchte ich zu einem besseren Mensch werden.

'besserer Mensch', not 'Mann', because the word 'man' relates to humanity/humankind.
'Wegen dir' instead of 'deinetwegen', because it sounds better in the context.
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Lass´ mich für Dich ein besserer Mensch werden.

Freer translation, sounds nicer.
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Du gibst mir das Gefühl ein besserer Mensch sein zu wollen.

I would translate it like this, not too literal, because he expresses the way she makes him feel, not what he would like to become for her; that is my interpretation.
Peer comment(s):

agree Roland Grefer
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411 days

Ich möchte mein Leben für dich ändern.

Just think of the situation!
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Du machst mich wünschen ein besserer Mann zu sein!sein.

What else?
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