Russian term
Vyshla iz tyuremnyh zastenkov s podorvannym zdorovyem
Proposed translations
United States
I am determined and reliable
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian, English to Bulgarian, and 3 more.
I/she departed from inside the prison walls with failing health.
Ukraine
Human Translations. Exclusive.
Native in: Russian 
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English
I had passed the prison's walls with unrecoverable health
This will be better to say.
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DR. RICHARD BAVRY (X)
: to my eyes and ears does not convey the trauma of the original text
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Canada
Quality, Accuracy and Experience
Native in: English (Variants: US, Canadian) , Tagalog
Works in: German to English, Russian to English, French to English, and 4 more.
I came out of the prison walls with broken health
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DR. RICHARD BAVRY (X)
: yeah..how about destroyed with a bit of literary licence
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Nermina (X)
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DR. RICHARD BAVRY (X)
NATIVE ENGLISH Ph.D. 30 YRS. EXPERIENCE
Works in: Spanish to English, Italian to English, Russian to English, and 4 more.
I exited from those prison walls..my health gone!
Translating since 1984.
Native in: English , Russian
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian, Ukrainian to English, and 1 more.
Покинула тюрьму с подорванным здоровьем
Я покинула тюрьму с подорванным здоровьем
Or:
Она покинула тюрьму с подорванным здоровьем
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Marcus Malabad
: and nowhere in the text does it refer to the third person as well!
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Competent quick and precise.
Native in: Croatian , Spanish
Works in: Dutch to Spanish, Dutch to Croatian, English to Croatian, and 12 more.
She / I came out of prision with deteriorated health.
As "prision" is somewhat "neutral" you can use:
tyuremnaja kamara = isolation cell / solitary confinement
or something similar instead.
HTH
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DR. RICHARD BAVRY (X)
: does not scan well in English
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I disagree with you. The only word that might not be strong enough is, perhaps, "prision". Let native speakers judge.
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DR. RICHARD BAVRY (X)
NATIVE ENGLISH Ph.D. 30 YRS. EXPERIENCE
Works in: Spanish to English, Italian to English, Russian to English, and 4 more.
[COMMENT]
I/she emerged from the torments of prison with damaged health
Leaving prison, I / she was a wreck.
Leaving the walls of prison behind, I / she was a wreck.
You can assemble the best phrase for yourself.
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