Dec 14, 2001 14:00
22 yrs ago
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Dutch term
Jelena
Doet u ook mee ?
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Dutch to English
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Hello,
I would appreciate if somone could give me a hand with the translation of the following three sentences. I am a translator between German and English and managed to figure out the meaning of the rest of the text.
Thank you all for your kind assistance and help.
Best,
Jelena
-Wij verzoeken u vriendelijk deze titel - gratis - te registreren in onze softwaregids, waarna wij voor verdere promotie kunnen zorgdragen. U bent uiteraard vrij om meerdere titels te registreren.
-XXXis een unieke, branchegerichte portal waarin door middel van gratis productregistraties gegevens over alle softwaretitels gerubriceerd zijn terug te vinden.
-Doet u ook mee ?
I would appreciate if somone could give me a hand with the translation of the following three sentences. I am a translator between German and English and managed to figure out the meaning of the rest of the text.
Thank you all for your kind assistance and help.
Best,
Jelena
-Wij verzoeken u vriendelijk deze titel - gratis - te registreren in onze softwaregids, waarna wij voor verdere promotie kunnen zorgdragen. U bent uiteraard vrij om meerdere titels te registreren.
-XXXis een unieke, branchegerichte portal waarin door middel van gratis productregistraties gegevens over alle softwaretitels gerubriceerd zijn terug te vinden.
-Doet u ook mee ?
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1 hr
Dave Greatrix
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
United Kingdom
Dutch to English Technical Translator
Native in: English
Works in: Dutch to English, Flemish to English
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We would like to offer you the opportunity to register......
this software in our software guide - free of charge! We will then ensure its further promotion. You are of course free to register several titles.
xxx is a unique branch orientated catologue featuring the details of all software titles that have been registered free of charge!
Would you like to be included?
"catologue" is probably more familiar than "portal"
Hope this helps.
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Note added at 2001-12-14 15:56:54 (GMT)
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If your wondering where classified is, "catalogue" implies that the products are "classified"
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Orientate is to be directed at.
xxx is a unique branch orientated catologue featuring the details of all software titles that have been registered free of charge!
Would you like to be included?
"catologue" is probably more familiar than "portal"
Hope this helps.
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Note added at 2001-12-14 15:56:54 (GMT)
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If your wondering where classified is, "catalogue" implies that the products are "classified"
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Note added at 2001-12-14 21:09:26 (GMT)
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Orientate is to be directed at.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you all for the help you provided me.
If you ever need assistence with German or Croatian terminology, I will be more than happy to help.
Best,
Jelena"
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9 mins
Dave Greatrix
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
United Kingdom
Dutch to English Technical Translator
Native in: English
Works in: Dutch to English, Flemish to English
Related KudoZ points
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1747
Would you like to be included?
You could also just say "interested" or "would you like to take part?" but it does ask you if you would like to register a software, so you would be included in a register.
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jarry (X)
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Cheers ,Jarry!
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Tina Vonhof (X)
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Thank You Tina, a very Merry Christmas!
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Will you... / Do you want to participate?
We kindly request you to register- free of charge- this title in our software guide. Afterwards we will take care of any further marketing activities.
You are welcome to register any additional titles.
-XXX is a unique, corporate portal in which all classified software titles can be traced, at no cost.
Will you participate?
This should do the trick. You might get some variations on the same theme, I guess..
Regards,
Pieter_H
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What is your billing address..? :-o))
You are welcome to register any additional titles.
-XXX is a unique, corporate portal in which all classified software titles can be traced, at no cost.
Will you participate?
This should do the trick. You might get some variations on the same theme, I guess..
Regards,
Pieter_H
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What is your billing address..? :-o))
Peer comment(s):
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jarry (X)
: Instead of 'afterwards' it should say: We will then take care ...(a typical mistake made by Dutch native speakers).
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Thank you Jarry, ..learning all the time..:-o))
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Tina Vonhof (X)
: 'Request you to' should be 'request that you' or 'invite you to'. 'Like to be included' is better than 'participate'.
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Laurent Slowack
Native in Dutch
Linguist, Translator, CAT tools
Native in: Dutch (Variant: Flemish) 
, Spanish (Variant: Mexican)
Works in: Spanish to English, Dutch to English, Dutch to Spanish, and 7 more.
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Would you like to join us?
This one may be less formal, but it motivates people to participate.
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Dave Greatrix
: It doesn't sound English in this context. You are asked to join a club or a sect, but not a catologue. you ask to be included in a catologue.
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