Sep 6, 2006 20:15
17 yrs ago
Russian term
на все виды довольствия с присвоением звания "рядовой" на должность "курсант"
Russian to English
Law/Patents
Military / Defense
This is the full sentence (it's an excerpt from a commanding officer's military order):
"...зачислить [такого-то] в списки личного состава войсковой части № __ на все виды довольствия с присвоением звания "рядовой" на должность "курсант"..."
I have plenty of suggestions from dictionaries and encyclopedias, but I need something that would sound authentic and culturally appropriate in English at the same time reflecting the specifics of the Russian Air Force.
I'm particularly interested to see how native speakers would relay the 'full scholarship' thing, as well the difference between "рядовой" and "курсант" as between "звание" and "должность".
I'd prefer to grade the answer that puts it all in one sentence.
Thank you for your help.
"...зачислить [такого-то] в списки личного состава войсковой части № __ на все виды довольствия с присвоением звания "рядовой" на должность "курсант"..."
I have plenty of suggestions from dictionaries and encyclopedias, but I need something that would sound authentic and culturally appropriate in English at the same time reflecting the specifics of the Russian Air Force.
I'm particularly interested to see how native speakers would relay the 'full scholarship' thing, as well the difference between "рядовой" and "курсант" as between "звание" and "должность".
I'd prefer to grade the answer that puts it all in one sentence.
Thank you for your help.
Proposed translations
(English)
| 1 | a try |
Vladimir Dubisskiy
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| 3 | "...to place [something/someone] on the rosters of Military Unit # ___ [and] to receive all allowanc |
ctirip
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Proposed translations
7 hrs
Vladimir Dubisskiy
United States
United States
Native in Russian
United States
UNSURPASSABLE EXPERIENCE
Native in: Russian 
, Ukrainian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Ukrainian to English, and 3 more.
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Russian term (edited):
на все виды довольствия с присвоением звания
Selected
a try
..to enlist XXX for military service with the Unit No XX with all allowances, and with the rank of Private under the specialty Air Cadet
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Private_(rank)
http://www.cadets.ca/aircad/ranks-grades/intro_e.asp
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Military_rank
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Private_(rank)
http://www.cadets.ca/aircad/ranks-grades/intro_e.asp
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Military_rank
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "I've always admired your research skills and overall competence, Mr. Dubisskiy. Thank you for your help.
Thank you, ctirip, for your input, as well. I actually used your 'rosters', so it wasn't all Mr. Dubisskiy."
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Russian term (edited):
на все виды довольствия с присвоением звания
"...to place [something/someone] on the rosters of Military Unit # ___ [and] to receive all allowanc
The repetiveness of "на" is throwing me off a little, but I think I have captured the essence of the order.
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Note added at 58 mins (2006-09-06 21:13:33 GMT)
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(answer cut off) allowances at the rank of 'private' while assigned as a '[military] student'..."
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Note added at 58 mins (2006-09-06 21:13:33 GMT)
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(answer cut off) allowances at the rank of 'private' while assigned as a '[military] student'..."
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