Nov 3, 2016 07:35
7 yrs ago
Spanish term
France
Por/Sp/Cat/Fr->En, IoLDipTrans, MACantab
Native in: English
Works in: Portuguese to English, Spanish to English, English, and 2 more.
ponen a disposicion la venta del 45% sociedad
Spanish to English
Bus/Financial
Business/Commerce (general)
investment brochure
Hi everyone! This is an investment brochure for a luxury property (XXX). I'm sure it's a basic concept but I need to make sure I've got the English completely correct and natural. Translation to UK English. Thanks for your help!
"Los socios fundadores ponen a disposición la venta del 45% sociedad perteneciente a la Patrimonial propietaria del XXX. Esta opción comprende la adquisición de acciones de dicha sociedad, obteniendo así una posición como socio..."
"Los socios fundadores ponen a disposición la venta del 45% sociedad perteneciente a la Patrimonial propietaria del XXX. Esta opción comprende la adquisición de acciones de dicha sociedad, obteniendo así una posición como socio..."
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 +2 | are offering to sell 45 percent of the company |
philgoddard
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| 4 | offer to sale 45% of the company |
Sergio Kot
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| 2 | are putting 45% of the company up for sale |
Wendy Streitparth
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Proposed translations
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5 hrs
philgoddard
United States
United States
Native in English
Specializes in field
United States
Six languages into flawless English
Native in: English
Works in: German to English, French to English, Spanish to English, and 4 more.
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298
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are offering to sell 45 percent of the company
Or "hereby offer for sale" if it's a formal prospectus.
There's obviously a couple of words missing, presumably "de la".
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Note added at 5 hrs (2016-11-03 13:21:01 GMT)
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I think there may be something else wrong with the Spanish. The overall meaning is probably "is offering to sell 45 percent of the equity in the company that owns XXX."
There's obviously a couple of words missing, presumably "de la".
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Note added at 5 hrs (2016-11-03 13:21:01 GMT)
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I think there may be something else wrong with the Spanish. The overall meaning is probably "is offering to sell 45 percent of the equity in the company that owns XXX."
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks, Phil!"
28 mins
Wendy Streitparth
Germany
Germany
Native in English
Germany
45 years experience
Native in: English (Variant: British)
Works in: German to English, French to English, Spanish to English, and 2 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
12
are putting 45% of the company up for sale
In lay terms at least!
Peer comment(s):
| neutral |
philgoddard
: I think this is too colloquial for a formal document.
4 hrs
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OK, is "on the market" better?
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58 mins
Sergio Kot
Israel
Israel
Native in Spanish
Works in field
Israel
Hebrew-English-Spanish-Yiddish-Aramaic
Native in: Hebrew (Variant: Modern / Israeli) 
, Spanish (Variants: Uruguayan, Argentine, Standard-Spain, Rioplatense, Chilean, Latin American)
Works in: Spanish to Hebrew, English to Hebrew, Hebrew to English, and 3 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
4
offer to sale 45% of the company
In view of context
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Note added at 7 hrs (2016-11-03 15:02:21 GMT)
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Sorry! My mistake. Obviously "Offer to sell 45% of the company"
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Note added at 7 hrs (2016-11-03 15:02:21 GMT)
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Sorry! My mistake. Obviously "Offer to sell 45% of the company"
Example sentence:
The founding partners offer to sale 45% of the company's (shares)
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