Mar 17, 2023 12:04
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Russian term

Имена в диалоге Сашка, Машенька, Лариска, Натах, Андрюха

Russian to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature Romance novel
What would be more appropriate for translating Russian names used in a conversation into English (dialogue sequences in a romance novel).

For example:
"Натах, ты что?"
"Андрюха, ну хватит уже..."

Would transliteration be suitable in this case? Or localization, such as "Natasha --> Tash, or Andrey --> Andy..."?

Any advice would be greatly appreciated here. Thanks

Discussion

danya Mar 21, 2023:
one thing about transliteration Натах and Андрюх are technically vocatives, so we'd need to transliterate the nominative form in each case
Sarah McDowell Mar 21, 2023:
I would transliterate the names To be honest, I would probably just transliterate the names. I feel that translating names like Андрюша and Машенька into Andrew or Mary causes a literary work to lose the Russian feel of the original. So if this is a novel that takes place in a Russian-speaking setting I would transliterate the names to make it sound more authentic.

Proposed translations

-1
13 mins

Alex, Liitle Mary, Lara, Nata, Andrew

I would use:
Alex for Sashka (boyish character, could be both male and female)
Little Mary for Mashenka (someone gentle, nice and small)
Larissa (or Lara) for Lariska (tomboy character)
Tash (or Nata) for Natakh (someone nice and close friend but a bit of tomboy), and
Andrew for Andryukha (a next door boy, but still quite young)
Peer comment(s):

disagree Inna Borymova : I've seen Mashenka and Ivanushka (e.g. Sister Alyonushka and Brother Ivanushka) in many translations including classics.
5 mins
Why not. It depends on whether the translator wants to use Russian-like option or localize it.
neutral Boris Shapiro : Just omit 'Little'. The Russian suffixes themselves do indeed have almost nothing to convey to the English-speaking reader.
1 hr
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