oferta de ocio
English translation: entertainment offerings
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|  Selected response from: Marian Greenfield Local time: 08:39 | ||||||
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| 5 +1 | leisure activities |
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| 4 +1 | entertainment offerings |
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| 4 +1 | leisure and entertainment offering |
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| 5 | opportunities |
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| 4 | presence/availability |
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| 4 | presence/availabilty/accessibility |
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| 4 | options for entertainment |
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presence/availability Explanation: i would definitely go with the presence/availability of ... in the selected markets (or maybe target markets- don't know the context) |
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10 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +1
peer agreement (net): +1entertainment offerings Explanation: supply and demand is <oferta y demanda>, so supply often works well, but I think your phrase goes something like this: the current entertainment offerings in the select markets will be analyzed. While disponible is <available>, I would say it's understood, so your 2nd phras could simply be: entertainment offerings hth msg |
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11 mins confidence:
presence/availabilty/accessibility Explanation: Dito |
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45 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +1
peer agreement (net): +1leisure and entertainment offering Explanation: I would use both leisure and entertainment, as I think both are commonly used for "ocio", and offering, singular. Here are a couple examples: These venues have been overwhelmingly successful, providing an attractive leisure and entertainment offering to consumers in Foster's heartland - the suburbs and regional cities of Victoria and increasingly Australia. The facilities we develop in partnership with the Supporters Clubs will provide the local community with a first rate leisure and entertainment offering which will include value-for-money meals and refreshments, childminding services, and state-of-the-art gaming machines in a modern and comfortable environment. In your case, "the current leisure and entertainment offering will be analyzed..." "the leisure and entertainment offering available..." etc. Hope it helps. Reference: http://www.fosters.com.au/corporate/news/speeches/docs/etkce... Reference: http://www.tabcorp.com.au/about_tabcorp/media_release/23_OCT... |
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2 hrs confidence: peer agreement (net): +1
peer agreement (net): +1leisure activities Explanation: Also recreational activities, options, etc. I would leave "oferta de entretenimiento" as entertainment. |
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1 day 7 hrs confidence:
opportunities Explanation: sounds good to me. |
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1 day 16 hrs confidence:
options for entertainment Explanation: If you have too many times the words offer and offerings, in this sentence you could use the variation: "current options for entertainment in selected markets will be analyzed". Hope it helps generate more ideas. |
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