Jul 24, 2016 09:03
7 yrs ago
Russian term

актуальность стимулируется прогрессом

Russian to English Science Science (general) scientific writing
Актуальность такой научной работы дополнительно стимулируется прогрессом в создании и совершенствовании математических моделей.

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pls see below

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The progress in creating and improving mathematical models makes this research increasingly relevant.
In view of the progress being made towards creating and improving mathematical models, the research becomes increasingly relevant.
Peer comment(s):

agree Rachel Douglas : With "progress makes"! "Progress in the creation and improvement of m.m. makes this research ... even more timely [relevant, urgent]." Maybe even drop "Progress in" - "The creation of new m.m., and their improvement, make..." / Second version's too wordy.
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Thank you! It's funny though, 'cause that's exactly how I was gonna put it: 'progress IN THE CREATION.. etc', but then I changed my mind for some reason :-) PS: Er, actually, I thought my other option was way better.
agree The Misha : Oops, posted my answer before seeing yours.
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Great minds... :-D
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you all so much!"
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relevance is incentivized by progress in

If to utilize UN-related verbiage.
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topicality is additionally spurred by the progress.....

I would suggest
Peer comment(s):

neutral The Misha : What on earth is topicality? Is it even a word in English?//Let me suggest some contact with natural English.
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let me suggest some contact with the Oxford Russian Dictionary
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urgency is stimulated by

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Peer comment(s):

disagree The Misha : There is nothing here about urgency. This is a clumsy mistranslatiion.
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the stimulus for this work also comes from progress in ...

Then you can lose актуальность!
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This research becomes even more relevant in light of continuous progress

creating and improving mathematical models.

You really need to rephrase it a bit here. It sounds awful in Russian and even more so if you translate it verbatim.
Peer comment(s):

agree El oso
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