any improvements on the sentence?

English translation: a stab

20:52 Jul 5, 2009

English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Art/Literary - Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting

English term or phrase: any improvements on the sentence?

"Once a viewer gets tuned into vibrations and energy flow emanating from the painting, he or she will receive sudden strokes of hitherto unknown ideas".

It is a description of a painting which, apart from its artistic merits, creates an an energetically charged space, brings about dramatic changes in its owner's life, bla-bla-bla.

Any suggestions and comments are welcome.
Thank you!

martsina KudoZ activity Questions: 50 (none open) (1 closed without grading) Answers: 278 Israel
Local time: 23:23

Selected answer:a stab

Explanation:
Though without the source text, this is really a stab in the dark!

Once viewers tune into the vibrations and energy emanating from the painting, ideas hitherto unknown will flash before them/will occur to them/will spring to mind.

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Thanks for the points, martsina

Selected response from:

Helen Shiner
United Kingdom
Local time: 21:23

Grading comment

Thanks a lot, Helen!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer

SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED

3 +5

a stab

Helen Shiner

3 +2

suggestion below

Mark Nathan

"..will receive a flow of..."

eski

Discussion entries: 5

Answers

10 mins confidence:

peer agreement (net): +2

suggestion below

Explanation:
When the viewer becomes tuned into the vibrations and energy emanating from the painting, glimpses of previously unknown ideas are suddenly revealed.

Mark Nathan
France
Local time: 22:23
Works in field
Native speaker of:

English
PRO pts in category: 4

Notes to answerer

Asker: Thanks, Mark.

1 day 5 hrs confidence:

"..will receive a flow of..."

Explanation:
The Flow of Ideas advances critical thought on education, information, ... of managing and exploiting knowledge and information on a scale hitherto unknown. ...
www.flowideas.co.uk/?page=articles&sub... - En caché - Similares

eski
Mexico
Local time: 14:23
Specializes in field
Native speaker of:

English,

Spanish
PRO pts in category: 8

Notes to answerer

Asker: Thank you!

58 mins confidence:

peer agreement (net): +5

a stab

Helen Shiner
United Kingdom
Local time: 21:23
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 4

Grading comment

Thanks a lot, Helen!

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