May 22, 2003 09:25
21 yrs ago
English term
sentence
Non-PRO
English
Marketing
Business/Commerce (general)
commerce
There will be no more shipping past that date since this item will be discontinued without replacement
oes it sound correct to you?
thanks in advance
oes it sound correct to you?
thanks in advance
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I hope I'm not expecting this item
There will be no shipping after that date because this item will be permanently discontinued.
This sounds like the whole shipping department will stop after that date because of the discontinuation.
If ‘shipping’ only of that item is meant:
This item will be permanently discontinued on DATE after which it will no longer be shipped.
Specify the date if it’s mentioned otherwise substitute ‘DATE’ with ‘that date’.
This sounds like the whole shipping department will stop after that date because of the discontinuation.
If ‘shipping’ only of that item is meant:
This item will be permanently discontinued on DATE after which it will no longer be shipped.
Specify the date if it’s mentioned otherwise substitute ‘DATE’ with ‘that date’.
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There will be no more shipping after that date, since this item will have been discontinued
This is one of the ways I might say it.
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asusisu (X)
: replace that with this and replace since with as
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Bin Zhang
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A bit clumsy - word order
After that date, due to it being discontinued without replacement, this item will no longer be shipped.
Maybe paraphrase something like above.
Maybe paraphrase something like above.
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