Jun 10, 2005 22:59
19 yrs ago
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Italy
25 anni al servizio dell'italiano
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it's the same certificate from Harvard:
The President and the Members of Harvard Collelge, with the approval *[or better: consent?] of honorable examiners, during a solemn assembly *(ceremony?)
admitted XXX to the grade pf M.A. in Law and gave* him (granted?) all the signs and rights which are due to this grade
Thans in advance to the native speekers for a proofreading: it must be a very official form, of course
The President and the Members of Harvard Collelge, with the approval *[or better: consent?] of honorable examiners, during a solemn assembly *(ceremony?)
admitted XXX to the grade pf M.A. in Law and gave* him (granted?) all the signs and rights which are due to this grade
Thans in advance to the native speekers for a proofreading: it must be a very official form, of course
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Michael Powers (PhD)
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United States
US Court Cert. 1980 Ph.D. 1981
Native in: English
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The President ... with the endorsement of the honorable ... ceremony ... to the degree ... granted
Note - it has to be "degree" not "grade" - M.A. is a degree
Also "sign" is wrong - usually on degrees we talk about "right and privileges"
Also "sign" is wrong - usually on degrees we talk about "right and privileges"
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Comment: "thanks!"
+4
10 mins
consent / ceremony / bestowed
watch your typos: thanks in advance, native speakers !
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Vicky Papaprodromou
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Balasubramaniam L.
: Isn't the "ceremony" here "convocation ceremony"?
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jennifer newsome (X)
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Alfa Trans (X)
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