Jun 5, 2009 05:55
15 yrs ago
Japanese term
収まりの良い
Japanese to English
Tech/Engineering
Automotive / Cars & Trucks
The topic is how the steering systems feel while driving in 3 different cars.
車Ａに対し、車Ｂと車Ｃは振動のピーク低く、
段差乗り越し後の減衰も大きめ。
感覚上もクリアでキレ（収まり）の良いフィール
What would 収まりの良い be?
Thanks.
車Ａに対し、車Ｂと車Ｃは振動のピーク低く、
段差乗り越し後の減衰も大きめ。
感覚上もクリアでキレ（収まり）の良いフィール
What would 収まりの良い be?
Thanks.
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 +1 | short settling time |
Yuki Okada
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| 3 | finely tempered to respond faithfully |
Katsushi Saito
|
| 2 | a good settlement (or ending, or conclusion, etc.) |
gordonmurray
|
References
| FYR, please |
cinefil
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Proposed translations
+1
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Yuki Okada
Canada
Canada
Native in Japanese
Works in field
Canada
Engineering translator
Native in: Japanese 
Works in: English to Japanese, Japanese to English
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115
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short settling time
収まり, in this case, means to come to an end. This is talking about vibration after a shock, and I think 収まりの良い car spends a short time before the vibration diminishes. Technically, it is called a settling time. It's somethig like the figure you see in the link:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Settle_time
I am more curious to see how you might translate クリアでキレの良いフィール. Maybe sharp and crisp handlling?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Settle_time
I am more curious to see how you might translate クリアでキレの良いフィール. Maybe sharp and crisp handlling?
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks!"
1 hr
gordonmurray
Japan
Japan
Native in English
Specializes in field
Japan
experienced technical J->E translator
Native in: English
Works in: English to Japanese, Japanese to English
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3
a good settlement (or ending, or conclusion, etc.)
Just a literal translation : 収まり means "settlement", or "an end", etc.
13 hrs
Katsushi Saito
Japan
Japan
Native in Japanese
Japan
Highly-skilled EJ/JE language engineer
Native in: Japanese
Works in: English to Japanese, Japanese to English
Related KudoZ points
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12
finely tempered to respond faithfully
あえて訳すと、感覚上もクリアでキレ（収まり）の良いフィールは、
They convey a crisp and pleasant feeling with their steering capability finely tempered to respond faithfully.
とでもなるでしょうか･･･。(車Ｂと車Ｃのことを指しているので、主語は複数形。)
「収まりの良い」にこだわらず、思い切って全体の意味を表現する方向でいったらどうでしょうか。
これ、もしかして、コピーライティング用の文章ですか。
They convey a crisp and pleasant feeling with their steering capability finely tempered to respond faithfully.
とでもなるでしょうか･･･。(車Ｂと車Ｃのことを指しているので、主語は複数形。)
「収まりの良い」にこだわらず、思い切って全体の意味を表現する方向でいったらどうでしょうか。
これ、もしかして、コピーライティング用の文章ですか。
Reference comments
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