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9th ProZ.com Translation Contest: "Business" » English to Indonesian

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Source text in English

I remember reading once that some fellows use language to conceal thought, but it's been my experience that a good many more use it instead of thought.

A businessman's conversation should be regulated by fewer and simpler rules than any other function of the human animal. They are:

Have something to say.

Say it.

Stop talking.

Beginning before you know what you want to say and keeping on after you have said it lands a merchant in a lawsuit or the poorhouse, and the first is a short cut to the second. I maintain a legal department here, and it costs a lot of money, but it's to keep me from going to law.

It's all right when you are calling on a girl or talking with friends after dinner to run a conversation like a Sunday-school excursion, with stops to pick flowers; but in the office your sentences should be the shortest distance possible between periods. Cut out the introduction and the peroration, and stop before you get to secondly. You've got to preach short sermons to catch sinners; and deacons won't believe they need long ones themselves. Give fools the first and women the last word. The meat's always in the middle of the sandwich. Of course, a light butter on either side of it doesn't do any harm if it's intended for a man who likes butter.

Remember, too, that it's easier to look wise than to talk wisdom. Say less than the other fellow and listen more than you talk; for when a man's listening he isn't telling on himself and he's flattering the fellow who is. Give most men a good listener and most women enough note-paper and they'll tell all they know. Money talks -- but not unless its owner has a loose tongue, and then its remarks are always offensive. Poverty talks, too, but nobody wants to hear what it has to say.

The winning entry has been announced in this pair.

There were 9 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase, 4 of which were selected by peers to advance to the finals round. The winning entry was determined based on finals round voting by peers.

Competition in this pair is now closed.


Entries (9 total; 4 finalists) Expand all entries

Entry #8341
Arfan Achyar
Arfan Achyar
Indonesia
Winner
Voting points1st2nd3rd
214 x41 x23 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.752.75 (4 ratings)2.75 (4 ratings)
Entry tagging:
 
 
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
menggugah hati
Flows well
Hobira
Entry #9781
Regi2006
Regi2006
Indonesia
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
152 x42 x23 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.502.33 (3 ratings)2.67 (3 ratings)
Entry tagging:
 
 
  • No "like" tags
Entry #8347
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
132 x42 x21 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.422.33 (6 ratings)2.50 (6 ratings)
Entry tagging:
 
 
  • 2 users entered 2 "like" tags
  • 1 user agreed with "likes" (1 total agree)
+1
hewan yang bernama manusia
Good term selection
Batara
menyadarkan
Flows well
Hobira
Entry #10565
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
131 x44 x21 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.502.60 (5 ratings)2.40 (5 ratings)
Entry tagging:
 
 
  • No "like" tags


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