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35th Translation Contest: "Once Upon a Myth" » English to Urdu

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Source text in English

The Pima Indians of Arizona say that the father of all men and animals was the butterfly, Cherwit Make (earth-maker), who fluttered down from the clouds to the Blue Cliffs[…] and from his own sweat made men. As the people multiplied, they grew selfish and quarrelsome, so Cherwit Make was disgusted with his handiwork and resolved to drown them all.[…]

There was one Hauk, a devil of the mountains, who stole their daughters and slew their sons. […] He silently followed him into the Superstition Mountains; he drugged the cactus wine that his daughter was to serve to him; then, when he had drunk it, Suha emerged from his place of hiding and beat out the brains of the stupefied fiend. […]

So firmly do the Pimas rely on this prophecy that they will not cross the Superstition Mountains, for there sits Cherwit Make — awaiting the culmination of their wickedness to let loose on the earth a mighty sea that lies dammed behind the range.

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Entry #39272 — Variant: Not specified
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پیما باشندوں کو اس پیش گوئی پر اتنا پختہ یقین ہے کہ وہ سوپرسٹیشن پہاڑوں کو عبور نہیں کرتے، کیونکہ وہاں چروِٹ میک بیٹھا ہے۔
Flows well
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تمام انسانوں اور جانوروں کا باپ ایک تتلی تھی، جسے وہ ’’چروٹ میک‘‘ (زمین بنانے والا) کہتے تھے۔ وہ بادلوں سے اڑتا ہوا نیلی چٹانوں (Blue Cliffs) پر اترا اور اپنے پسینے سے انسانوں کو پیدا کیا
Flows well
The Urdu t​ranslation​ reads nat​urally, wi​th smooth ​sentence f​low.
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اس نے ناگ پھنی (کیکٹس) کی اس شراب میں نشہ آور دوا ملا دی جو دیو کی بیٹی نے اسے پیش کرنی تھی؛ پھر جب وہ شراب پی چکا، تو سوہا اپنی کمین گاہ سے نکلا اور اس مدہوش درندے کا سر کچل ڈالا۔
Flows well
The senten​ces are re​adable and​ preserve ​the origin​al meaning
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ایریزونا کے پیما انڈین کہتے ہیں کہ تمام انسانوں اور جانوروں کا باپ ایک تتلی تھی، جس کا نام چروِٹ میک (زمین بنانے والا) تھا۔ وہ بادلوں سے اڑتی ہوئی نیلی چٹانوں پر اتری
Good term selection
The transl​ation uses​ clear and​ appropria​te Urdu wo​rds.
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