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Gone is the law of might makes right, gratuitous acts of violence, and mockeries

Personal knowledge

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Note added at 2003-10-27 23:16:36 (GMT)
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Oops, actually it should be acts of gratuitous violence.

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Note added at 2003-10-27 23:21:24 (GMT)
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To be perfectly grammatical, it should be \"Gone is the law of might makes right, as well as acts of gratuitous violence, and bullying.\" (I agree with Jane that \"bullying\" is better than \"mockeries.\")
Peer comment(s):

agree CHE124
1 min
Thanks!
agree Jane Lamb-Ruiz (X) : Gone are and mockeries is really bullying
5 mins
Thanks, Jane
agree William Stein : Gone are the days of might makes right, gratuitous violence and mockery.
42 mins
Thanks. I like this way of dealing with the wording.
agree Jean-Luc Dumont : and with William
1 hr
Thanks
agree Charlie Bavington : except for "mockery", seems a bit weak to me. What about "putting people down"?
4 hrs
agree Jean-Claude Gouin : et avec William ...
4 hrs
agree Lindsay Edwards : Agree with Jane
9 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "I thought this was the closest possible translation which kept to the gramatical french. I agree with the second note that it should be gratuitous violence rather than acts of violence. "
5 mins

The law saying that only the strongest shall prevail is over, so are acts of gratuitous violence

and bullying

:)
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+2
6 mins

no more bullying, acts of gratuitous violence and mocking.

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Note added at 8 mins (2003-10-27 23:20:17 GMT)
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... are somewhat intelligent. The material displayed on this page contains
100% pure violence and mocking of the innocent. By entering ...
www.geocities.com/drexeldave/ - 7k - Supplemental Result - Cached - Similar pages
Peer comment(s):

agree Jean-Luc Dumont
1 hr
agree sarahl (X)
1 hr
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26 mins

So long with the rule of the powerful, no more acts of gratuitous violence and mockeries.

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28 mins

The law of the jungle is done with, and we will not allow anymore...

...gratuitous violence and put-downs/bullying...
or: We won't allow anymore the law of the jungle, gratuitous violence and put-downs/bullying.
or: The law of the jungle, gratuitous violence and put-downs/bullying are done with/won't be allowed anymore.
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+2
57 mins

We've had it with the law of the jungle, gratuitous violence and scorn.

That's enough of might makes right, senseless violence and mobbing

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Note added at 2003-10-28 00:11:43 (GMT)
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Or the \"sociological version\":
Let\'s put a stop to Social Darwinism in a world of meaningless violence and mockery.
Peer comment(s):

agree IanW (X)
7 hrs
agree lien : plus simple,plus percutant, much more to the point, moins "preche". Je mettrai "bullying" a la place de scorn.
12 hrs
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10 hrs

The idea that might is right is gone, along with the gratuitous violence and scornful insolence.

I think that, in English, the first phrase needs a verb, and, although it means the same, it isn't quite as strongly put as 'bullying'. I also think that it is worth reinforcing the meaning of 'scorn' to make it clear that it is something negative that has now been done away with, and, as it is about kids, I think 'insolence' gives the idea of the tone that is probably indicated by the French version.
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15 hrs

Bullying, teasing, and senseless (acts of) violence are no longer tolerated.

I changed the word order a bit.
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1 day 13 hrs

Down with the survival of the fittest, violence per se and lack of respect towards others.

could be a version
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