Oct 31, 2019 13:25
4 yrs ago
Spanish term

zarpazo

Spanish to English Other Fisheries Maritime
I can't find an adequate translation for this word anywhere, in this context. I get the general idea, it's a sudden rush of water, but how to translate it?

«Este viento helado silba ruidosamente, como ventisca en desfiladero, pero distinto a todo lo conocido: la nieve se mezcla con la ola pulverizada por el choque contra el casco y el zarpazo inunda la cubierta, rociando toda la embarcación.

Discussion

Neil Ashby Oct 31, 2019:
Swell is too gentle, IMO.
Why not somthing like:
".....as they crash against the hull and are pulverised into a spray that rains back down on and covers the deck, misting the whole vessel."
S. Kathryn Jiménez Boyd (asker) Oct 31, 2019:
Thanks everyone Thank you everyone for your contributions. I ended up using "swell", I liked it best in this context. In the end, I translated this sentence as: “This frozen wind blows fiercely, whistling like a blizzard in a gorge, but unlike anything we have ever seen: the snow mixes with the waves as they crash against the hull and are pulverised into a spray, and this swell floods the deck, misting the whole vessel."
Taña Dalglish Oct 31, 2019:
https://www.wordreference.com/es/en/translation.asp?spen=zar...
zarpazo lashing, beating n, i.e. the waves/water lashing against the hull and innundating/flooding the deck.
S. Kathryn Jiménez Boyd (asker) Oct 31, 2019:
I know that "blow" is what is in the dictionary, but it doesn't sound right to me to say a "blow" floods a deck. There has to be another word that makes more sense given the context.

Proposed translations

+1
38 mins
Selected

Swell

Or perhaps 'surge' of water.

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Note added at 2 hrs (2019-10-31 16:11:35 GMT)
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Thank you! Glad to help out, it's a lovely visual to be translating!
Example sentence:

a swell/surge of water

Note from asker:
Hi Sarah, thanks, "swell" is what I was looking for! Since it's flooding, it has to still be a word that reflects a mass of water, and this was perfect. I will choose your answer and grade it as soon as 24 hours pass. Cheers!
Peer comment(s):

agree neilmac : This is (ahem) a swell solution :-)
1 hr
Thanks! ;)
neutral Neil Ashby : "swell" just produces a gentle movement, you wouldn't expect it to slosh water all over the deck and raise a spray.
2 hrs
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+1
28 mins

blow

zarpazo

blow

..the snow mixes with the wave pulverized by the crash against the hull and the blow floods the deck, spraying the entire boat.

https://www.wordreference.com/es/en/translation.asp?spen=zar...

https://www.spanishdict.com/translate/zarpazo

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Note added at 41 mins (2019-10-31 14:06:36 GMT)
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Maybe better to use a term like hit, or shock?
Peer comment(s):

neutral philgoddard : I don't think a blow can inundate a deck.
4 mins
You are right, doesn't sound strong enough! Maybe better to use a term like hit, or shock?
agree patinba : "Blow" is fine.The spray from the blow (it is no longer a "mass of water") floods the deck, spraying ("rociando")all over the vessel.
1 hr
Thank you Patinba :)
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35 mins

(huge) mass of water

"Huge" is optional poetic license.

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Note added at 1 hr (2019-10-31 14:44:12 GMT)
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Or "great".
Peer comment(s):

neutral Sarah Leonard : I think the word 'mass' tends to conjure ideas of something solid, whereas the water is flooding the boat, so womething that denotes the movement of liquid would be better.
6 mins
My choice of words was deliberate. The water is like a large, heavy object hitting the boat. Swell and surge are too gentle in my opinion.
neutral patinba : The blow has pulverised the wave, so it is no longer a solid mass of water, just a huge spray.
1 hr
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