Oct 5, 2005 11:10
18 yrs ago
English term
meant either ... or their valuables taken from them
English
Art/Literary
Poetry & Literature
children's literature
The highlanders could pretend to be kind and sympathetic, but for others their sympathy always meant either slavery or their valuables taken from them.
Dear native English speakers!
Please help with the phrase to get the idea across. I feel that it sounds somewhat awkward, but can't come up with anything better.
What I'm trying to say here is that the highlanders' false sympathy either ended in slavery for other people (at the worst), or they would simply get hold of other people's valuables.
This is my translation from Russian.
Dear native English speakers!
Please help with the phrase to get the idea across. I feel that it sounds somewhat awkward, but can't come up with anything better.
What I'm trying to say here is that the highlanders' false sympathy either ended in slavery for other people (at the worst), or they would simply get hold of other people's valuables.
This is my translation from Russian.
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+9
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meant either... being enslaved or being relieved of their valuables
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you for your help Kevin! Thanks everybody!!!"
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meant having (either) their freedom or their valuables taken away from them
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Vicky Papaprodromou
: Excellent structure, Nick!
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Thank you, Vicky!
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agree |
Rachel Fell
57 mins
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Thank you, Rachel.
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agree |
Jörgen Slet
11 hrs
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Thank you, Jörgen.
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agree |
Alexandra Tussing
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Thanks!
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meant either ... slavery or thievery
That is what I would do, for the rhythm and pithiness of it when phrased this way.
Make each word tell - succinctly even in literary prose and poetry, sometimes. : ) Cheers.
Make each word tell - succinctly even in literary prose and poetry, sometimes. : ) Cheers.
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Alfredo Tutino
: A matter of personal taste... I like this
54 mins
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Alfredo, accosento; grazie molto e saluti. : )
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transparx
14 hrs
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Thanks so much Nino : )
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meant either slavery or robbery
"robbery" says that their valuables would be taken, it rhymes with "slavery", and it presents a similarly frightening image. As "slavery" only occurs by force, the idea of theft by force, i.e. "robbery", seems most appropriate.
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