Oct 5, 2005 11:10
18 yrs ago
English term

meant either ... or their valuables taken from them

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature children's literature
The highlanders could pretend to be kind and sympathetic, but for others their sympathy always meant either slavery or their valuables taken from them.


Dear native English speakers!

Please help with the phrase to get the idea across. I feel that it sounds somewhat awkward, but can't come up with anything better.
What I'm trying to say here is that the highlanders' false sympathy either ended in slavery for other people (at the worst), or they would simply get hold of other people's valuables.

This is my translation from Russian.

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meant either... being enslaved or being relieved of their valuables

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agree Jack Doughty
6 mins
Thank you, Jack.
agree Vicky Papaprodromou
1 hr
Thank you, Vicky.
agree John Fenz : ...and very elegant!
1 hr
Thank you, John.
agree flipendo
1 hr
Thank you.
agree Vjekoslav Pavic : Excellent! And very... English :))))))
1 hr
Thank you.
agree Saleh Chowdhury, Ph.D.
1 hr
Thank you, Saleh
agree Jörgen Slet
13 hrs
Thank you.
agree Alexandra Tussing
14 hrs
Thank you Alexandra.
agree Alfa Trans (X)
1 day 5 hrs
Thank you, Marju.
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you for your help Kevin! Thanks everybody!!!"
+4
2 hrs

meant having (either) their freedom or their valuables taken away from them

Peer comment(s):

agree Vicky Papaprodromou : Excellent structure, Nick!
10 mins
Thank you, Vicky!
agree Rachel Fell
57 mins
Thank you, Rachel.
agree Jörgen Slet
11 hrs
Thank you, Jörgen.
agree Alexandra Tussing
12 hrs
Thanks!
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4 hrs

meant either ... slavery or thievery

That is what I would do, for the rhythm and pithiness of it when phrased this way.

Make each word tell - succinctly even in literary prose and poetry, sometimes. : ) Cheers.
Peer comment(s):

agree Alfredo Tutino : A matter of personal taste... I like this
54 mins
Alfredo, accosento; grazie molto e saluti. : )
agree transparx
14 hrs
Thanks so much Nino : )
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17 hrs

meant either slavery or robbery

"robbery" says that their valuables would be taken, it rhymes with "slavery", and it presents a similarly frightening image. As "slavery" only occurs by force, the idea of theft by force, i.e. "robbery", seems most appropriate.
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