Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
with a breath
Spanish translation:
con un suspiro
Added to glossary by
Lydia De Jorge
Sep 15, 2007 03:21
16 yrs ago
English term
with a breath
English to Spanish
Art/Literary
Poetry & Literature
Caribbean poetry
This is the context in which the phrase appears:
I saw my mother kneel beside him.
She started chanting and rocking, to and fro
and with a breath, she pulled up
his limp torso, and placed his head
on her shoulder, her tiny arms
barely linked around the width
of his muscular back.
How would you translate it? I´m open to any suggestion! Thanks!
I saw my mother kneel beside him.
She started chanting and rocking, to and fro
and with a breath, she pulled up
his limp torso, and placed his head
on her shoulder, her tiny arms
barely linked around the width
of his muscular back.
How would you translate it? I´m open to any suggestion! Thanks!
Proposed translations
(Spanish)
4 +11 | con un suspiro/respiro | Lydia De Jorge |
4 +2 | con una inspiración | Darío Giménez |
4 | con una exhalación, respiro, pausa | Susie Miles (X) |
Change log
Sep 16, 2007 04:25: Lydia De Jorge Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
+11
4 mins
Selected
con un suspiro/respiro
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Note added at 1 day1 hr (2007-09-16 04:25:21 GMT) Post-grading
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Me alegra haber podido ayudarte! Saludos!
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Note added at 1 day1 hr (2007-09-16 04:25:21 GMT) Post-grading
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Me alegra haber podido ayudarte! Saludos!
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Gracias Lydia! Con un suspiro fue mi traducción inicial, me parece que captura la idea del autor! Gracias a los que apoyaron la respuesta de Lydia también!"
+2
5 hrs
con una inspiración
Otra opción... menos "poética". :-)
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Bubo Coroman (X)
: creo que la madre tuvo que inspirar para poder levantar entonces el pecho del hombre.
1 hr
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Sí, eso me pareció a mí también. Gracias, Deborah.
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agree |
Adriana Penco
: Sí, con esfuerzo.
4 hrs
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Eso entiendo yo. Gracias, arte!
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8 hrs
con una exhalación, respiro, pausa
Son solamente otras opciones a elegir entre las ya mencionadas
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Note added at 9 hrs (2007-09-15 12:45:40 GMT)
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Después de seguir pensándolo, creo que en este caso, sólo correspondería exhalación o suspiro...
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Note added at 9 hrs (2007-09-15 12:45:40 GMT)
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Después de seguir pensándolo, creo que en este caso, sólo correspondería exhalación o suspiro...
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