Feb 1, 2006 09:37
18 yrs ago
English term

hold over my story

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature children's literature
I’ve begun to notice lately that as soon as I’m about to do something things often turn the other way around. This is just what’s happening right now. I've got things to do. So I think I have to hold over my story.

Dear native English speakers!
Please advise if it's OK to put the phrase this way. Does it sound natural enough?
The character has been telling a story but now he has to stop for there are a few other things for him to do, though he hopes he can finish his story later.
Would "I think my story will have to wait" be better, maybe?
I'll appreciate any suggestions.

Responses

+19
1 min
Selected

my story will have to wait

your second choice is fine
Peer comment(s):

agree Tony M : Yes, 'hold over' is really what an editor might do to your submission, for publication in a later issue...
4 mins
agree Francesca Callegari
14 mins
agree David Knowles : Yes, this sounds more natural, and what a story-teller might say.
29 mins
agree Ulrike Kraemer
47 mins
agree Jack Doughty
1 hr
agree cmwilliams (X)
1 hr
agree SirReaL
2 hrs
agree Eva Ballentine (X)
2 hrs
agree William [Bill] Gray : Yes, his second choice was just what is being said.
3 hrs
agree awilliams
3 hrs
agree Sonia Gomes
3 hrs
agree Can Altinbay : A couple of the other suggestions are OK (but not "future consideration"), but this one is just right.
5 hrs
agree Alfa Trans (X)
7 hrs
agree Alexandra Tussing
7 hrs
agree conejo
8 hrs
agree Tania Marques-Cardoso
13 hrs
agree Seema Ugrankar
14 hrs
agree Romanian Translator (X)
15 hrs
agree Mwananchi
1 day 1 hr
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you for your help Melanie! Thanks everybody!!!"
+1
7 mins

put my story on hold

another way

on the back burner
Peer comment(s):

agree SirReaL
2 hrs
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13 mins

to keep for future consideration

One of the meanings of "hold over" is "to keep for future consideration or action: postpone."
Reference: Random House Webster's Unabridged Dictionary
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1 hr

postpone my story

Another suggestion
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