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2014 annual ProZ.com translation contest: "Celebrations" » English to Indonesian

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Source text in English

Who cast that first fateful tomato that started the La Tomatina revolution? The reality is no one knows. Maybe it was an anti-Franco rebellion, or a carnival that got out of hand. According to the most popular version of the story, during the 1945 festival of Los Gigantes (a giant paper mâché puppet parade), locals were looking to stage a brawl to get some attention. They happened upon a vegetable cart nearby and started hurling ripe tomatoes. Innocent onlookers got involved until the scene escalated into a massive melee of flying fruit. The instigators had to repay the tomato vendors, but that didn't stop the recurrence of more tomato fights—and the birth of a new tradition.

Fearful of an unruly escalation, authorities enacted, relaxed, and then reinstated a series of bans in the 1950s. In 1951, locals who defied the law were imprisoned until public outcry called for their release. The most famous effrontery to the tomato bans happened in 1957 when proponents held a mock tomato funeral complete with a coffin and procession. After 1957, the local government decided to roll with the punches, set a few rules in place, and embraced the wacky tradition.

Though the tomatoes take center stage, a week of festivities lead up to the final showdown. It's a celebration of Buñol's patron saints, the Virgin Mary and St. Louis Bertrand, with street parades, music, and fireworks in joyous Spanish fashion. To build up your strength for the impending brawl, an epic paella is served on the eve of the battle, showcasing an iconic Valencian dish of rice, seafood, saffron, and olive oil.

Today, this unfettered festival has some measure of order. Organizers have gone so far as to cultivate a special variety of unpalatable tomatoes just for the annual event. Festivities kick off around 10 a.m. when participants race to grab a ham fixed atop a greasy pole. Onlookers hose the scramblers with water while singing and dancing in the streets. When the church bell strikes noon, trucks packed with tomatoes roll into town, while chants of "To-ma-te, to-ma-te!" reach a crescendo.

Then, with the firing of a water cannon, the main event begins. That's the green light for crushing and launching tomatoes in all-out attacks against fellow participants. Long distance tomato lobbers, point-blank assassins, and medium range hook shots. Whatever your technique, by the time it's over, you will look (and feel) quite different. Nearly an hour later, tomato-soaked bombers are left to play in a sea of squishy street salsa with little left resembling a tomato to be found. A second cannon shot signals the end of the battle.

The winning entry has been announced in this pair.

There were 17 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase, 3 of which were selected by peers to advance to the finals round. The winning entry was determined based on finals round voting by peers.

Competition in this pair is now closed.


Entries (17 total; 3 finalists) Expand all entries

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Entry #15502 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Nur Cholis
Nur Cholis
Indonesia
Winner
Voting points1st2nd3rd
15132 x410 x23 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.493.44 (16 ratings)3.53 (15 ratings)
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  • 5 users entered 9 "like" tags
  • 7 users agreed with "likes" (10 total agrees)
  • 1 user disagreed with "likes" (1 total disagree)
+6
1
cikal bakal
Flows well
Love this ​choice of ​wording.
lunadespierta
lepas kendali
Good term selection
Yuliana Wati
+2
ranum
Good term selection
I like the​ usage of ​'ranum' to​ replace '​matang'
candrayu sotyaningtyas
+1
1
terpantik
Flows well
terpantik ​is really ​indonesian
genta ulina
berkobar
Good term selection
Yuliana Wati
gegap-gempita
Good term selection
candrayu sotyaningtyas
-1
+1
1
membabi buta.
Flows well
if you see​ the real ​tomato fig​ht, in you​tube for e​xample, u ​will know ​that 'memb​abi buta' ​is appropr​iate.
Dwi Retno
sari buah tomat
Flows well
during the​ event, th​e street i​s flooded ​with tomat​o juice, s​o it' good​ term to d​eductible ​it.
Dwi Retno
sari buah
Flows well
same reaso​ning for t​he other o​ne.
Dwi Retno
Entry #16904 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
8712 x414 x211 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.173.25 (12 ratings)3.08 (13 ratings)
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  • 1 user entered 3 "like" tags
  • 3 users disagreed with "likes" (3 total disagrees)
-3
1
tomat naas
Good term selection
It implies​ misfortun​e, the ele​ment being​ present t​hrough out​ the writi​ng piece.
ariesti
perang buah terbang besar-besaran
Good term selection
Adds a com​ical sense​ to the se​rious act.
ariesti
pertempuran pamungkas
Flows well
Makes the ​fight soun​d obsolete​, which is​ what it r​eally is.
ariesti
Entry #16415 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
An Ismanto
An Ismanto
Indonesia
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
615 x412 x217 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.373.50 (16 ratings)3.24 (17 ratings)
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  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
kirab
Good term selection
"kirab" fo​r "carniva​l" --just ​excellent.
Lianita Dessy


Non-finalist entries

The following entries were not selected by peers to advance to finals-round voting.

Entry #19237 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
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Entry3.093.17 (12 ratings)3.00 (13 ratings)
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Entry #18820 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
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Entry3.002.94 (16 ratings)3.06 (17 ratings)
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Entry #18344 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
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Entry2.832.79 (14 ratings)2.87 (15 ratings)
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Entry #19309 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
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Entry2.812.92 (12 ratings)2.69 (13 ratings)
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Entry #21469 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
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Entry2.802.87 (15 ratings)2.73 (15 ratings)
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  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
  • 1 user agreed with "likes" (1 total agree)
+1
pihak berwenang
Good term selection
paulinethe
Entry #15928 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
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Entry2.762.83 (12 ratings)2.69 (13 ratings)
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Entry #18694 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
Damaarti
Damaarti
Indonesia
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Entry2.752.91 (11 ratings)2.58 (12 ratings)
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Entry #18278 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
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Entry2.622.73 (11 ratings)2.50 (12 ratings)
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Entry #18094 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
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Entry2.592.60 (10 ratings)2.58 (12 ratings)
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  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
  • 1 user agreed with "likes" (1 total agree)
+1
nyaring
Good term selection
fird_77
Entry #17866 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
juliarti
juliarti
Indonesia
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Entry2.342.38 (13 ratings)2.29 (14 ratings)
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Entry #20656 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Fenny7694
Fenny7694
Indonesia
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Entry2.292.08 (13 ratings)2.50 (14 ratings)
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